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[recyclethedead]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?


Step 1: Post a blank comment with the account of the character you'd like crit for or post a list of the characters you'd like crit for if you'd like to save time.

Step 2: Other people reply with constructive criticism, whether it be minor or major. If they have none, they're free to just throw some praise your way.

Step 3: Do the same for others.

-Anon is enabled, do not exploit this. If you can't use the power responsibly it might be taken away.

-Constructive crit, try to provide more detail than just saying someone sucks. Explain why you feel that way, provide suggestions to help the player fix it if you can. Just saying someone sucks helps no one.

-This is a critique meme, so commenting is at your own risk and no one can guarantee you will only be told what you want to hear.

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Comments

[lightyin]

lightyin
antipodean
darkyang
shadedlight
rikuonehalf
a_second_chance

[dawnrise]

I can't really think of anything. Both of us play our Rikus in their finest moments pretty similar, so either we're both IC or horribly OOC. And we've both complained enough about fanon!ku.

I do want this lady to meet darkyang some time, though. I don't think she has yet.

[clockworknomore]

I happen to love the way Riku and Shiru play off each other. :3 Haven't really tagged anyone else of yours. The only crit I would have is that Shiru needs to traumatize Kira some more.

[dawnrise]

aprincess
dawnrise
hallowedshore
mouseketeers

I don't use anyone else enough any more to put them on there. Mostly looking for crit for Girlyku. Am I doin' it right? I've tried to make her less violent, but sometimes I feel like she's too friendly, then I look at how much of a cold bastard Riku is in doujin and what a dork he is in the games and I'm like hmm.

[f1re0nthesun]

Shut your face, Riku is the best thing ever. You already know I consider her more canon than most other Rikus. She's not too friendly, she's just the right amount of a standoffish bitch and also kind of a softie, and I LOVE HER.

Aden is the second best thing ever, he is the perfect blend of everything.

I can't really judge Kairi because I never know what kids are supposed to be like at different ages, but I love her.

YOU ARE A REALLY GOOD RPER OKAY ;o;

[clockworknomore]

Obviously I am a big fan of Girlyku... so much that I almost typed "Riku-pi" instead BECAUSE THAT'S HER NAME DAMMIT. I think she's the right balance of friendly but standoffish, which kind of fits with canon-Riku? Because he's totally a dork when he's around his friends but otherwise he's always kind of badass and untouchable.

Kira adores Aden. ♥ I think it's interesting that we've managed to have the future kids pretty much not be fighters despite their parents and all.

[f1re0nthesun]

omfg everyone please give me stuff on here i love these

not because i'm self-conscious, because i'm not (that often, anyway...), but i like hearing what other people think of my characters, good OR bad, and please feel free to tell me that i need to do something differently. i am aware that i don't know how2child most of the time, and that my threads tend to stall for a few days at a time, frequently more with everyone but my main axel.

f1re0nthesun
smolderingf1re
tinyf1re
crownofembers
nagaxel
and hyenabutts i guess

[lightheart]

U SUK PLZ GO

god i don't even pay attention to most threads unless they're linked in chat???? but can i say i really like inaya...

[dawnrise]

Tag me moar. If I had anything to complain about it would be outweighed by the fact that you play a really awesome and well-thought out AU.

...have you ever played canon Axel? I can't remember.

Also, though: stop dropping tinyxel threads with me!

[lightyin]

I like your Axel and wish to thread with him more often when Riku isn't on a bacon binge.

Or with Ninku. Who I miss, despite him being canonless. :<

/least productive crit ever

[clockworknomore]

I like Ninxel! I'm familiar with Naruto canon so I know how wacky that 'verse can be when it comes to things. I think his devotion to Kai is very sweet and mushy and sexy and all good things.

Inaya needs to do girly bonding things with Kira so they can boobsquish some more. :/

[clockworknomore]

windup_boytoy
windup_daddy
daddyhasagun
clockworkboytoy
clockworknomore

I love these things. Please give me crit on the Ris and Kira. Too OOC? I worry if Ri is too godmoddy sometimes when he's supposed to be a midboss. :/ And Kira is... Kira.

[f1re0nthesun]

Nah, Ri's fine, I have the same problem with Axel. I end up handwaving stuff sometimes because I really have no idea how to describe the shit he can do sometimes. Half of Naruto canon is just people godmodding all over the place at each other, so.

Anyway, I love Ri and Daddy and they're both so incredibly infuriating sometimes with their own kind of logic and especially Ri's stubbornness and EXTREME PREJUDICE when it comes to certain things. My dad actually has logic a lot like Ri's sometimes. I love Tinyri, and both how little and how much he's changed since I first saw him when I came to the DR. I think what you did with the older version of Tinyri was fabulous, and he seems like the most normal of the whole bunch, somehow.

Kira is amazing, and I would probably not get along with her AT ALL if I knew her irl. She's just so.... Kira. I'm wearing two different types of purple plaid right now and give no fucks, and she would be appalled. \o/

[dawnrise]

I will admit that Ri and Kira both can be totally overwhelming at times, not to mention hard-headed, but it's so fitting for them and makes so much sense. Ri drives Riku crazy. She loves him though. They need more threads lately, we're slacking. ):

I don't have any crit for you either, just more love. Sorry.

I don't think he's godmoddy, though! Especially considering the crazy shit these characters pull in canon, which leave so much room for MORE that the characters could have done. Like Demyx drowning someone, or Axel setting people on fire- oh wait, that actually happened...

[darkyang]

I love Kira, even though she makes my main Riku want to escape out the nearest exit if he hangs out with her too long. Shiru loves her too. Though he's totally not sleeping with her don't hurt him DaddyRi.

Ri amuses me and I love the way you play him. That's all I have to say about him.

[gameofpretend]

gameofpretend
datafreeze
censoredpilot
foxbutt
justalittlesick
conspiracyiv

ahaha, fuck I need to actually play my other characters in the DR more so people can actually crit them.

[dawnrise]

how2crit AUs

I dunno. I wish we had more threads together, but that's not a fault of yours.

[clockworknomore]

I rather like Luxord in his interactions with Kira. He's the right amount of creepy and she's just the right amount of clueless about how dangerous he can be.

...................... Ri hates Even. All the Ris do. So that means you're doing a good job with him, too.

[snowandsky]

I'm still new, b-but...

[dawnrise]

We've only had one thread together, but your Sora seems like a Sora to me! I don't have any crit, just keep doing what you're doing!

[agrabah_weapon]

Here we go. Though haha, loads of these need more airing anyway.

agrabah_weapon
blankedpoint
exmariascientia
forza_del_bene
kingdom_seed
lightofoblivion
tideturned

[windup_boytoy]

I like Kurt! He's pretty nice for a Heartless. I guess it's a good thing that tiny-Replica probably keeps him supplied with Hearts-in-jars just don't ask where they come from. I guess he could be more Heartless-y, but then he wouldn't have any friends, or keep getting killed or something.

[reversedestiny]

reversedestiny
feedmyglitch
irritum
dealwithawitch

I don't think I do enough to be critted.

[isthejournal]

I like trolling your data!Heartless.

I'm not here to provide actual crit, just to compliment your Sora-playing.

[captive_destiny]

captive_destiny
heartshero
giveyoumy
twilit_papa

[daddyhasagun]

PAPA WHY ARE YOU BEING SO MEAN TO YOUR DAUGHTER.